Film pitch/initial ideas class feedback

This is our class feedback from our film pitch and initial ideas, the criticisms will allow us to alter our ideas and film concept as our peers are our target audience demographic.


Coppola Kings: 4/5
Positive;

• Unique and interesting concept of linking manga/comicbooks within J-Horror.
• Good use of intertextuality; referencing other J-horror style films.
• Character profiles and related images a good visual aid whilst pitching.

Improvement;

• Narrative complex and opening sequence may be over time.

Meadows Marauders: 4/5
Positive;

• Interesting narrative
• Good research on genre conventions and history

Improvement;

• Camera movement may be prolonged and unnecessary, e.g; character traveling back home.

Tarrantino Tigers:  5/5
Positive;

• Great use of intertextuality with The Ring and The Grudge.
• Interesting narrative.
• Good research on our genre and its conventions.
• Character profile and images effective.
• Good detailed and well presented work.
• Impressive research on the genre of J Horror.
• Good character profiles, original and unique.

Improvement;

• Needed setting/locations explained, maybe primary shots of filming area